At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of adult people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays many nations in the world are experiencing the growing number of population of young adults, when comparing to the aged population of that country. Although there are some disadvantages of this trend, there are more and numerous advantages in my point of view.
Firstly, decreased aging population may result in number of consequences. In fact, older older people have valuable and precious experiences that lead the country to a better and prosperous future. A case in point that this knowledge is crucial in professions such as medicine, law and even in politics. Highly sophisticated tools and equipments should be handled by experienced and more adult people. In this context decreased aging population means that decreased experience as well. In addition to this when people are getting older they tend to be more tolerant and less prone to conflict in their lives. Therefore, declined aging population has a negative impact on a country.
On the other hand,there are clear benefits of having more young adults within a nation. First and foremost, healthier younger generation is the driving workforce of a country. Dedication and hard work will strength the young adults to experienced stakeholders of development. Not only younger people are more energetic and enthusiastic when comparing to the older generation but also they are willing to take risks in order to gain success in their lives. Because of these reasons, increased number of younger generation is an asset to the world.
In conclusion, would population is now consisted of increased rate of young adults and it has clear advantages rather than disadvantages.
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Suggestion: older
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29389312977 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93886437913 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6487586399 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227069539947 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718384333325 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542776733087 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15082983915 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708814768713 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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