QUESTION PROMPT
The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A rising figure of obese individuals is increasing the workload in the therapeutic milieu in an attempt to curtail health problems associated with it. A lot of people are of the opinion that to tackle this issue, physical education lectures must be introduced into the academic schedule. However, I strongly disagree that lectures on physical education be included in academic curriculum because, even though exercise is necessary, people can loose weight through intake of more fatty food and by carrying out intermittent fasting.
To begin, intake of fatty food helps fight obesity. This is because food such as avocados and eggs triggers leptin hormone production in the brain which provide longer satiety thus preventing intake of food with less nutritional contents. Interestingly, fatty food contains more calories compare to other classes food. For example, research has shown that high intake of oily food is becoming increasingly popular in recent years because good cholesterol food contains about 70% of calories. So some individual would prefer to take oily food than to exercise.
Additionally,intermittent fasting is another easy method of weight loss. Reason being that, when an individual is on fast, the body make use of stored ketones which is the end -product of cholesterol to generate energy necessary for proper functioning of the body thus aiding weight loss. For instance, in 2008, international journal on obesity indicated that intermittent fasting which is up to 24hours in a week duration leads to weight loss in overweight individuals.
To conclude, although exercise plays a crucial role in weight loss , I still remain firmly convince that intake of food cholesterol diets and intermittent fasting can help to fight obesity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41090909091 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03279699171 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1961781668 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984195986729 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381790308968 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451409355448 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570029570429 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068470451561 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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