In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?
It is true that working in the equal communities can inspire people to accomplish their personal purposes better while many people argue that people are capable of adapting to work environments that they are enabled to express themselves without fair play so they can have a chance to discover their own abilities. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, there are two main points of staying in the free communities which support people to find out the harmony with each other. first of all, if people start at the same point, there is no doubt that they will not be isolated which brings detrimental effects to the development of their career progressions. For example, in a balance society, staffs may strengthen the relationship with their co-workers and they will not be obsolete. However, when living in the equal communities, people do not have to attempt to attain their goals due to the lack of their competitors. As a result, the quality of their works can be affects because people do not devote their lives to work as well as in competitive environment. According to many experts, there is nothing to compare with harsh circumstances which enhance the future prosperity of people.
Turning to the other side of the argument, if people are free to creative and attain high or low status which in accordance with their knowledge, they will try their best to catch opportunities in their life. For instance, sometimes in equal societies people tend to follow each other without effort which can be tackle if people are only concentrate on their purposes. By contrast, there is a dark side to this picture, it can weaken the relationship between individuals and societies due to the fact that they only focus on their plans. Consequently, they will lose cooperative skills which is essential to any circumstance.
In conclusion, my own view on the matter is that both sides play an important role in community but people not only maintain the communal activities but they also have to enhance their understanding for the sake of their targets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...o find out the harmony with each other. first of all, if people start at the same poi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90985915493 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76165543217 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52676056338 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7665005623 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.076923077 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8461538462 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107067188422 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424683973906 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378278421438 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721990576557 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375068979449 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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