In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globaisation is a good thing. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Recently, the rapid development of the internet, air trips, trade and prominent culture has led to the massive globalisation increase. Therefore, it is believed that improving interaction between countries through globalisation is a good thing. From my point of view, I agree with the opinion that globalisation is an acceptable development.
To start with, globalisation brings some noticeable advantages to every nation. Firstly, the countries’ economies benefit greatly from importing and exporting goods to other nations worldwide. Dwellers can experience a wide range of goods selection, especially when they need a product that is not manufactured enough in their countries. Secondly, many foreign companies can employ foreign labourers and engineers from other low-cost labour nations, which can help these enterprises save huge amounts of money annually. As a result, these poor countries may benefit from the decreasing unemployment and poverty rates. Consequently, globalisation is assessed to be a superior improvement of the world.
By contrast, there are some significant drawbacks of globalisation that should be considered. One of them is brain drain, which is a negative influence on every countries’ economies. This phenomenon is significantly harmful to developing nations' economies because these countries really need help from skillful workers. Besides, the overexposure of international cultures such as Kpop or foreign languages can also affect people's mindset, especially young generations. As people are increasingly attracted by multinational cultures, they may easily ignore their traditional ones, which leads to the disappearance of memorable cultures.
In conclusion, the spread of globalisation has benefits that outweigh its disadvantages. In my opinion, I believe governments should ensure the dramatical rise of globalisation in any aspect of the nation’s economies and cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the nation’s economies and cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97826086957 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38103859342 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644927536232 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8149720104 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201178208946 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628321640755 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709184434204 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129894102851 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936374783209 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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