In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trade and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is a good thing. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
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speaking the world is exponentially globalizing. Therefore, nations and their cultures are being brought together. The question is whether globalization helps us become open-minded or it makes our cultural differences being lost.
In my opinion, due to globalization discovering world around us is never been easier. It helps one learn about cultural differences, meet new cultures and most importantly it helps one understand itself and it’s origin. Also, with globalization people are becoming conncted and possibly more united which are important elements when it comes to preventing global poverty and social inequalities.
However, it appears to me that globalization makes our nations blend with each other and consequently cultural differences are becoming erased. As people move around the globe, sometimes it makes them forget about their own tradditions while trying to fit in. In addition, due to the globalizations, rough migration may lead to many disbalances.
From my point of view, even though globalization may lead to the loss of tradition and also enhance world’s disbalances, it has much more advantages especially when it comes to nations being more united and thefore connected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13964569022 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0510483209 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798668129938 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304389389141 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191985036174 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043316764733 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156795581647 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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