Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. This essay below will open a discussion to clarify my own viewpoints somehow to the issue.
Nowadays, a minority of individuals in the current temporary society have a tendency to abort due to several personal life’ issues. There are some arguments that this is legal, whereas others believe that such action should not be done for various reasons. The essay below will discuss both views and give the opinion to the issue above.
On the one hand, pregnant inhabitants use abortion as a tool to rebalance and stabilize their current life situation. For instance, indivisuals don’t own enough finances and fortunes to care for their future generations or can’t afford to maintain a better life for them. Hence, they could either decrease their stress or reduce the burden of daily life. Moreover, using the mentioned action could provide a plethora of breakthroughs in resolving conflicts between family members.
On the other hand, although abortion has negligible influence on a certain individual, it could have an impact on the future generation. In general, the population in Japan has decreased slightly in recent years due to the fact that abortion has been a common action for the majority of young women for a while. As a result, the decreasing population not only minimizes the industrialization and modernization of the countries but also has a substantial impact on the human resources in many industries. Furthermore, abortion is both an inhumane solution to solve people's life issues and shows that they nowadays are more heartless and tend to follow indivisualism.
In conclusion, from my perspective, the society and community shoudl prevent people from abort. Abortion is a inhumanity and it could have a substantial impact on the the minds every female inhabitant who worries about the later life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25179856115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90490733428 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.432542646 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206187268583 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073829219559 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837631364654 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132437952926 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969059542483 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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