The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be use in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
historical building exists all around the world. governments want to protect through restoring. this restoration process is costly. therefore, some people think that this money which use for restoration has to be in city arrangement such as comfortable building and modern path. Actually, I strongly confirm that governments should plan budget which both restoration and city planning.
Firstly, I believe that cities has a spirit. that is, cities is a whole with its past and future. therefore, people who live in city responsible from protection of historical of the palace. And governments have to do studies like restoration. But good restoration is very expensive. if budget of city suffices, restoration for historical buildings should make.
On the other hand, other lesson is how important restoration to be made for the city. Restorating provide protect old building as well as increase tourist in area. Structure restored has to be well identified. I think that ıf restoration doesn’t have a strong purpose, this work must not make. The budget allocated for restoration is available for something different like building modern house or new road.
Finally, I consider that their budgets should primarily be used for development of city in developing city. For example; if city have not modern house which families live comfortably or seamlesss road, governments shouldn’t restorate.
In conclusion, governments should have a strong income for restoration. And they must distribute equally both restoration and other service such as road construction.
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government expenditures. This money should be use in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58921161826 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08674092851 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55601659751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4744340696 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.35 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.05 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.35 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303412811519 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943581150586 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427578088684 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176211818729 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533959432734 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.25 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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