Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The world is turning into global village now a days but still many countries are present where poverty is the big issue, countries who suffered in this problem can not easily fulfill basic desires due to lack of resources and income. Many countries help them by giving money, but it's not the solution of problem. By proceeding the statement I totally agreed money should be replaced by other effective type of help.
There is many powerful developed countries who can easily support them financially as well as economically, but in this way the problem does not resolve totally. Therefore, such developed countries should take some other steps to diminish the rate of poverty .
Firstly if developed countries helped them financially then level of corruption prevalent in front of people who deserve that money. Secondly the government are not capable to manage the funds properly, in this way aid will be lost before it reaches to people.
They should be supported them in major issues in education, a developed nation can build schools for poor nations but the expenses that incur later in regards to student's fees and teacher's wages may force to close the institution. secondly, Developed nations should introduce new companies their where new technologies, modern system occurred and people get more chance of employment.
In a nutshell, to overcome the major issue of poverty the developed nations must be given aids in different other ways rather than financially support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18257261411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63856808273 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3381191372 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331737579282 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138118909107 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782429382824 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178108958582 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840695457667 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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