Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Information technology is the fast growing field and it is considered to be subset of information and communication. It involves computer system and different advance techniques to run up the business well as well as influence our daily life routine , free time activities and especially working hours. This technology have lot of benefits that hidden the system drawbacks
This advance field have many crucial impacts on our life. Firstly,it involves the system of computers that helps in data processing coding system, storing ,transmit the data. Many IT expertise become professionals as a artificial intelligence and serve their nation. Technology play vital role in our lives and now we are living in that era where people attract towards technology more widely especially our young generations.
social media, internet all are very common in our daily routine. Mostly in our leisure time we must adopt these advance technologies to keep in touch with others ,of the mode of communication. we can transfer the data far away just with in few moments through G-mail system. In business people do online trade and include coding system because they know the exact logic or formula behind them.
Secondly, everything in his world have disadvantages, but it's all depend upon us who we use them. Information technology gives fastest communication but many expert hackers hacks the account of others and steal out the personal data or important details of them that happened frequently.
our young generation take this technology as a personal entertainment and enjoy them.
In a conclusion, we must wonder about the benefits of technologies as compared to drawbacks, and should keep everything in balance that helps to use the system well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: well as
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30575539568 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89425136208 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6420439056 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.357142857 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28330515487 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913150062261 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757089084669 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140749185586 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577402246551 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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