A rise in the standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference causes? How might these problems reduce?
The living conditions in a nation have been on the rise, as the belief of many people, are beneficial to the metropolises than the rural areas. This causes some negative consequences and the cures mentioned in this essay have been made to ease those problems.
Perhaps the greatest impact for the better living standard on cities is the matter of overpopulation. It is true that there would be a massive migration to the urban areas to seek jobs and pursue a good chance of living. Therefore, the cities with an exceeded population would experience a multitude of demerits which two of them can be named as traffic congestion and pollution. More people living in the city center need more transports to commute and this is the main contributor to pollute it. Another issue needs to be discussed is the increasing crime rate due to the gap between the rich and the poor. Take Los Angeles as the example for this, although the city life is better with a wide range of enjoyment for people to let the hair down, the criminals arrested are not in a small number.
Turning to the possible solutions, the government must pioneer prior to the investors to build up the factories and offices in the rural areas. This could attract many employees to come back their hometowns and keep the balance of population in both areas. What is more, more amenities and attraction sites should be constructed for country dwellers’ entertainment. When the residents’ lives are ensured, it would bridge the wealthy and underprivileged people.
To sum up, the drawbacks, have been led from the increasing trend of living standard, could be limited with the authority’s actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, it is true, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9609929078 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88108510386 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4765314478 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162669694762 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550164813935 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396316269953 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951485975116 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374621724966 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.