say people say that computers have made life easier and more convince. other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. what is your opinion?
At the present time, the invention of the computer is the greatest innovation to make humans more convinced while the other perspective thinks computers have made their life stressful and complicated. I Completely agree that computers have brought benefits although there are several drawbacks.
On the one hand, in the current situation, computers bring advantages for individuals. Firstly, the primary activities such as working and studying need a computer which makes their task finish rapidly. To illustrate, the tools like Microsoft office are required by the corporates which use computers to run this software. This is important to create the letter or send the documents using this device. Secondly, the essential aspect of the computer is saving a huge of data. Most of the computers have large storage around 500 Gb which is helping humans to collect the document. To illustrate, nowadays, A bank has to collect the data information about their customer, if there are complaints and issue, the computers would help the employee by check the detail from the computers. As a result, the invention of computers helps improve human activity which decrease the time for work.
Nevertheless, there are several disadvantages gained by people relying on computers. They will addict to playing the computers because the computers are integrated with the internet. For example, many students are lack performance in their school by the reason of they tend to play computers game. As a consequence, the negative impact will increase the number of diseases such as minus eyes.
To conclude, the computer changes the way to live at this time. This is lead to people being more convinced despite, there being some drawbacks to computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28776978417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78308494731 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3625794232 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247548027334 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765130485273 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725299015941 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164526649576 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933231521185 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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