Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. Give your opinion.
With the rapid development of advanced technology, some people believe that children can self-study without the assistance of institutions. Based on my experience and observations, however, I would take issue over such statement for two main reasons.
First and foremost, schools train students to be respectable citizens besides well-educated ones. Having to comply with school regulations, children gradually become more disciplined, which may result in their strict obeying to laws. Also, experienced teachers are certain to help the young to cultivate valuable moral lessons as well as survival skills that could hardly be obtained on their own. As educators definitely confronted failure at least once, the younger generations will be imparted know-how they acquired from such failing.
What is more, pupils have the opportunity to expose to practices. Since every school is supposed to be equipped with labs, learners can participate in experiments which can only be observed through screen without schools. For instance, after some certain tasks about plant cell, students will have a practice period to have real observation about it. Furthermore, extracurricular activities, such as competitions, trips to historical sites, are often held with the view to entertainment and studying. The effectiveness of learning process will, consequently, be boosted.
On the other sides, it is argued that there is an immense amount of information available on the Internet on a number of aspects of lifes. And it could be a better replacement for books and lessons at class. They forget, though, that a large part of such knowledge may be false, antiscientific, or even worse misleading on account that people can post anything without censorship. Whereas, schools are undoubted to provide trustworthy and vital insight.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that schools play an indispensible role in every successful students’ life. In addition to this, high-tech gadgets should be helpful assisting tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...And it could be a better replacement for books and lessons at class. They forget,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62295081967 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1124996155 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668852459016 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3819495356 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147998229284 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411010892327 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413672197494 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759964060715 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342146531051 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.