Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The rapid pace of scientific development has given rise to the demand for conducting individual projects of companies. Notwithstanding the security of and ample financial aid available for governments' research, I firmly believe that businesses should have a right to control their activities for the benefits they bring to the society.
On the one hand, the view that scientific investigation should be taken under the supervision of government agencies is reasonable to some extent. One justification for this is that such projects often involve high levels of secrecy and require substantial resources which private companies are unable to afford. The confidentiality of some sensitive information must be held in higher esteem in research about nuclear power, military intelligence or national defense which could pose pressing threats to the country once it is leaked to the rivals. Some research even needs years of commitment and the process might be too long for the private agencies to go through.
On the other hand, I believe that it is necessary to have business involvement in scientific investigation. Admittedly, this group is inextricably associated with the market needs. In other words, they represent the public's fundamental requirement since their services are often the reflection of consumer preference. Commodities related to cosmetic industry or medical supplements are some of the indispensable parts in our lives and it is more efficient for the private sector to participate since they are profit driven. Yet, this is not included in government expenditure as it belongs to personal needs and entitling businesses to supply such products is a more ideal option.
To conclude, I believe that governments and private organizations should be actively involved in scientific research. This could promote the cooperation of both state-owned research centers and individual research institutes, creating more tangible applications for our united progress
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62666666667 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16511540952 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2367866222 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200499275772 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736010806094 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748814962566 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126926243707 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586601935718 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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