Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage What are your views

Essay topics:

Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change.
Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of
individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.
What are your views?

In this day and age, it is clearly that climate change phenomenon is more and more well-known for individuals, more specifically for scientists and some websites on social media. For this situation, governing bodies cannot tackle this problem and from my opinion, it would be depended on the responsibility of citizens because of many reasons.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that dwellers of any countries should change their lifestyle to minimize damage so far. Firstly, private vehicles is described, people should use more public transportation instead of using their own motorbike or car. Regarding to coverage on the Internet, the quantity of gasses and carbon footprints from citizens’ vehicles has been increasing significantly into atmosphere that results in the number of oxygen of ozone layer are decreased considerably yearly.
Secondly, it is expected that people should change their lifestyle regularly in eating habit. People who live in rural areas usually have a tendency to hunt and consume wild animals more than people living in urban places. This situation will lead to a serious resulting to many inhabitants’ lives such as being some dangerous sickness in terms of cancer and also causing the polluted of water is due to the sewage of animals which is killed by people at the same time.
In conclusion, the impact of people’s lifestyle will influence in the weather and climate change to further damage and the responsibility cannot be relied on the governments. Citizens need to join hand to improve the climate change situation.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2390438247 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89275952161 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6833308831 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298132774863 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116727563958 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842462449046 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179386336867 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846096436769 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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