Scientists believe that by studying the behavior of 3 years old children, people can predict if that child can become a criminal in the future.
To what extent is crime a product of human nature?
Is it possible to stop children from growing to be a criminal?
It is asserted by the specialists that criminality could be estimated according to the research of children's behavior. This could be partially explained by several inherited traits and there are some preventative measures that could be taken to curb youth crime.
In regards to scientific studies, juvenile delinquency prediction could be attributed to one’s inborn characteristics that are passed down by their parents. Kids of violent criminals commonly display some abnormal behavior such as aggressive behavior or torture domestic pests for entertaining, which is one of the various prominent features to detect an impulsive offender’s offspring. A study conducted by researchers in Michigan University revealed that among 46 cases in which the parents commit crime out of violence, it is their sons are likelier to embark on the relatively similar offenses but out of impulsive behavior that inherently formed their individuality. The role of genes is deemed a considerable factor and could potentially arouse pessimists and viciousness in one’s development.
However, this problem could be tackled by interfering with children’s growth through education and instructions. Environmental factors have an influential impact on individuals’ cognition and thus, drive their intention and behavior to the ethical concept. Every child should be admitted to educational institutions in order to be taught about the distinction of right and wrong. Once the personal attitudes are positively manipulated by monitoring, the inner qualities of them would also be geared towards morality, which contribute substantially to the process of dissuading criminals since awareness has been instilled in one’s thinking. In addition, media platforms and applications contain numerous toxic contents that could leave perennial effects on children, governmental bodies should adjust the amount of violence in those channels to ensure that there would be no ramifications of blindly duplicating virtual or online characters’ actions given the continuous emergence of violence in films and games.
To conclude, criminality is the result of heredity to a moderate extent. It is important for the law enforcement and adults in the abstract to regulate children’s behavior and growth to crack down youth crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...could be taken to curb youth crime. In regards to scientific studies, juvenile delinquenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79765395894 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21644068263 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624633431085 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.2102946375 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.076923077 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188651224929 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705622161666 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477408372516 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125390368821 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302913561676 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.46 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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