Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this.
What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?
We have been informed by scientist long ago that, it is important we safeguard our environment by reducing the amount of power we consume on a daily basis. However, we have not been taking necessary measures to avert these consequences. This essay will explain the cause of this and profer possible solutions.
Generally speaking, people are not likely to heed the warning of something the government is not penalizing them for. If they are not held accountable by the authorities people will not amend their ways. Also, some people are actually naive about this topic, they are not really aware of the negative impact of excessive energy consumption and burning of fossil fuel. It should be taught in schools using documentaries and across all works of life to improve its awareness among the populace.
There are ways to improve the awareness of this issue and methods to encourage people to save our environment. First and foremost, there should be proper sensitization by the government and NGOs, They should continuously make public announcements in the community, printing flyers, holding conference, and workshops as well as involving all age groups and corporate bodies in this campaign of awareness. Also, the government should allocate a maximum daily energy quota in our homes and offices such that, when people surpass their daily energy allowance they are penalized for it. Perhaps they will begin to take little precautions, like using renewable energy bulbs, using less of fossil fuels, and switching off appliances when they are not in use. Finally, the government should develop other sources of energy like wind energy and solar energy.
There has to be more awareness among people and as well as holding people accountable for a change to be seen in the ways we utilize energy in our daily activities.
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- Most people believe that stricter punishments should be given for traffic offenses.To what extent do you agree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... government is not penalizing them for. If they are not held accountable by the au...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, however, if, really, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12040133779 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70022517245 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4390019999 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314735846476 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109795561432 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060457539656 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196373782912 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025772979928 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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