Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
“There is no excuse for animal abuse”. It is pathetic way to test modernist cosmetics and chemical drugs on animals. Animals have sense more than human, because they cannot express their feeling. This essay will light an animal's side and how cruel we treat them during testing then introduce solutions to save animal's life.
First of all, we cannot use animals in experiments or put them in terrible situation because there are animals. To clarify, these animals have rights like people, moreover it can expose to Psychological ,health and physical problems. Second, the researchers deprive animals from food and sleep, furthermore all of these animals expose to burn ,suffocate by co2 and broke neck. Then experimental animals test a new chemical drugs which cause pain for it or it may be lost its life. For instance, “save ralph” an animation movie which reflect suffering animals over decades that are exploded by beauty companies to produce cosmetics such as foundation, concealer and others.
Animal Rights institutions seek for prevent all of these awful ways on little animals. To clarify, There are many tests that are an alternative to using animals to conduct experiments or scientific research. For example, the use of “laboratory cell cultures” as it can be used to find out whether chemicals will cause skin burns or not. Also,” biochips", computer simulation and others.
To conclude, companies can do and experiment or new chemical drugs or cosmetics without using animals as a tool in their research which can cause harm diseases for these animals . In my opinion, we don't have right to harm any animal because they cannot express their feeling or talk to use .we have to be kind with them and give all love and care because they deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23630136986 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67036003633 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4250179766 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205215658419 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785665240099 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429976766821 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142178036917 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018104721648 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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