Should parks in city be replaced by different purposes. do you agree or disagree
There is an argument that the lands for parks in town should be used in another different purposes. In my opinion I strongly disagree with this idea.
Health experts agree that the best way to restore body and mind is to spent time in nature, pursuing a comfortable level of physical exercise. Spending time in nature surrounding is crucial because a majority of population live in cities. As society becomes more centered on city life, the most popular pastime is watching TV which is the most passive free time. The recent studies showed that spending time in city results in a decreasing of emotion controlling and concentration. However time spent in park figures the opposite effects. For example, the British report a high level of satisfaction when they send most of their vacationing outdoor in their national trust parks. Perhaps the rest of the world should follow their lead.
Moreover, teenagers are the most negatively affected by the city life. While parents are reluctant to let their children play freely in town, caring for their health and safety, and natural enviroment is the thing that they have no change to experience then childhood obesity and depression are reaching a higher level. Acknowledge that in other to encourage our teens rejuvenate them in nature deliberately, city parks seem to be the good place, providing a safe environment for our next generations outdoor activities.
On top of this, the green-house gases that are emitted by gas-power vehicles are responsible for a thousand deaths per year and claim for the raising of lung cancer figures in children. However the eco system of vegetations in the parks remove pollutants while their leaves filter the Carbon dioxide then release the Oxygen. In this case, the parks in metropolises have functioned as a green lung in urban areas which help to prevent the green-house effects, taking steps to make the world a better place.
In summary, Although there are a few opinions to replace the location for park in urban area. The benefits that parks have been contributing to our societies are unavoidable so obviously I do not support the idea to use there land for another purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01657458564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69330074992 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588397790055 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3583521625 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206998253226 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617527128216 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654289644954 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123627704532 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819922107616 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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