Social and modern trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to make the living more colorful, especially online. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should live in what we are having and feel comfortable.
To what extent do you agree with these statement?
Nowadays, to make the online environment more colorful and bring the community together. Social media users often create trends. Some people belive that trends exist only to entertain the online community and people should feel confortable for what they own. In my perspective, I highly agree with the above opinion.
On the one hand, trends are created by famous people for the social community to follow. For instance, celebrities upload videos in which they are singing a song or doing some weird actions to create a trend for their fans to follow. Thus, being famous and make an impact on the social media are the real reason that encourage people keep making trends.
On the other hand, according to the scientists, majority of the indivisuals in the idustrial era of 4.0 spent half of their day to watch and creating videos and trends. This is a waste of time when people can use time to learn and work. Moreover, majority of people who success , instead of spending their time on the online envinronment, they spend it on study and improve their knowledge. As a result, have an eye on their daily life and pay more attention to the real world are the real factor that make the living more comfortable.
In conclusion, people should pay more attention to their real life and decrease the amount of time that they spend on social platforms and creating trends.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Moreover, majority of people who success , instead of spending their time on the o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79661016949 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43767219345 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4114684867 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211407961663 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797577331627 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549629753613 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13561808396 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421789927151 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Moreover, majority of people who success , instead of spending their time on the o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79661016949 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43767219345 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529661016949 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4114684867 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211407961663 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797577331627 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549629753613 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13561808396 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421789927151 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.