some cities are growing large, what are the reasons and consequences
Nowadays, many cities have exploded more and more enormous to become giants in the world. Their rapid growth has some major reasons behind this tendency and these developments have an impact on the human and the plan.
there are several explanations for this trend and the main issue is that the overpopulation. In 2000, the population of the world are approximate 7 billion, this number is anticipated to keep to increase quickly. this leads to the lack of ground for residential zones and the service for life. therefore, it is necessary to expand crowded areas such as cities and it is an apparent fact that the sizes of these cities are spreading outwards. Another contributing justification is rapid economic changes. this is proving that the development of transportations has linked closely downtowns with suburban areas, in addition, all inhabitants have a requirement to access to modern equipment and optimal services. so, the policies address this demand by merging nearly outer areas into the center. For example, over some decades, the capital of Vietnam: Hanoi adds Hatay, Hadong, and Sontay to become the largest capital in the world.
this trend is likely to result in both negative impacts and positive impacts. First, a remarkable sigh of this tendency is that living standards have improved gradually. The civil are able to in search of opportunities for medicine, education, work and so on. The low-income families have increased significantly and the quality of life has raised sharply. therefore, the nations are willing to invest to expand the cities, contributing the sustainable development. By contrast, the changes, are too rapid, are likely to leave the difficult problems. The primary dilemma is environmental pollution. The faster-growing in low-elevation have brought about running out of plants, biodiversity, water, and resources. Furthermore, many factories spring up like mushroom and eliminating emissions, and the greenhouses are constructed. these factors are responsible for the warming of the earth. Secondly, the unstable growing makes a greater inequality. this means that the economy goes up without a suitable infrastructure. The people, who come from the low-income families in these cities, are facing with lack of housing. Beside that, the cost in cities is prohibitively expensive, and the poor have troubles with spending daily life. that makes the gap between rich and poor are widening and the society falls into imbalance. In conclusion, there are some explanations for the large development of cities such as population growth and jumping of economic. this trend is recording some merit and demerit effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37559808612 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99619062495 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557416267943 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0828033771 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4814814815 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07407407407 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112500023887 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263552629689 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401290228821 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864503926612 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026779614446 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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