In some cities, the government has imposed tax on the owners of the vehicles to reduce the traffic congestion. Do you think it is a positive or negative impact ?
In several nations, the tax has been enacted by government to the owners of private transports to solve the traffic problems. Personally, I opine this issue has several benefits which I will explain in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, we should not ignore the benefits of automobile restriction policy that this also has essential role in air quality issue, in which the number of pollutions in the world is at the alarming rate. With this policy, emission produced by vehicle would be lower and road users can reach the destination either effectively or efficiently. In fact, there are a lot of states in the world which are struggling to solve the high level of pollution. Furthermore, this regulation can limit people who are willing for purchasing more vehicles due to obliged to pay the duty of their own transportations. Therefore, society probably shifts to urban transport such as, bus and commuter line.
On the other hand, this view has been obvious to me giving several disadvantages that governments are facing difficulties to handle purchased vehicle on the illegal market. For example, the criminals smuggle automobile items from overseas without tax and customs (black market apps). Moreover, mediocre society is weighed the cost of living and also force people, in this economic status, put high effort to earn for living to fulfil basic needs. Besides, ordinary citizens not only impel to spend money on tax but also lead to high level of depression.
To conclude, while the drawback of this policy seems reasonable for some points, I would argue that the law enforcement of car ownership is more significance. This includes healthier quality of air and lower number of purchased vehicle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10992907801 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77253491441 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2239345284 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841799607171 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305938433148 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450591868464 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560290934226 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357259981618 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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