Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars,trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center.People are encourage to use public transportation such as buses,taxies and metro on vehicle free days.To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, majority of metropolitan cities around the world have started introducing vehicle free days as key factor to banning private cars from the central city. Public transport such as buses taxis or the subway are replace private cars completely on these days. However, such prohibition may initially be seen as inconvenience and bring out negative reaction also it has a potential to improve many aspects of city life.
Obviously, private cars in many cases offer greater convenience compared to public -transportation, which are also beneficial for busy executives, directors may not face out the challenges of being forced to use the subway. For instance, some of these high profile individuals rely on cars for their own security and that of valuable equipment they carry to meeting as well as their important work. Moreover, many businesses located in the urban area they might struggle if delivery trucks were restricted on certain days. As a result, this would cause problem with stock levels at various detail shops and supermarkets.
While, the benefits of car-free days are numerous. Reduce will enable public transport to move faster between stops, and also the air quality will improve significantly. Not driving to the city center will eliminate the everlasting parking problem for many people, saving the expense. Due to this safety will be increase and roads not being overcrowded therefore, not need to pedestrians whose security will be boosted by monitoring all cars allowed to enter the city center.
Another crucial consideration is a change mindset that vehicle free day would bring about. Being able to go through the day without car can be liberating experience for city workers. To exemplify that, in India, Mumbai city has famous for greater employment thus ,most of workers rely on public transport especially ,on train even ,it has also consider in gunnies book of world record for used for largest public transport. This real life demonstration would prove that cars are not always necessary and taking a bus or train can be just convenient and fast. By breaking the habit of reliance on private cars people would not only become more open but also receptive to new ways of moving around.
To sum up with ,although some may view prohibition of private cars negatively ,for the reasons that improved transportation ,better air quality and increased security it seems ,if some city will introduce vehicle free days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20151133501 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70037407145 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60201511335 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.011244459 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.470588235 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237509430764 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810900720457 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672556684356 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151603318444 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074780277524 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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