In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these to development? In your opinion which one is better.
Transportation system has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Presently, in some nations, cars are substituted by bicycles. On the other side, the use of bicycles is a gaining ground swiftly in place of cars. Here, I would like to throw light on the reasons behind this phenomenons with my perspective.
A bunch of causes are mentioned behind the happening of former trend. First and foremost, the usage of cars is on the elevation as a cars are convenient and the fastest mode of transportation to travel long distances as compared to bicycles. For example, numerous superior amenities such as comfortable seats, music system, centre airbags and so on are provided by cars whereas one cannot relish these facilities while using bicycles. Moreover, cycling requires a great deal of physical endeavours and people in this modern word are accustomed to comfortable due to all works done by modern apparatus. Hence, folks are showing their interest towards the uses of cars and instead of a bicycles.
Numerous reasons can be taken into account which are responsible for latter trend. Initially, in some countries people have the tendency to use bicycle as these are eco friendly and economical mode of transportation. To make it clear, there is no emission of toxic fumes while using by cycle and these are cheaper as compared to cars. Adding to it, cycling is a best physical exercise and therefore people, being health conscious use bycycle instead of cars. Besides this, the price of fuels is catching fire with divert people from using cars.
To recapitulate, undeniably, cars blessed the people with various amenities. But according to my opinion, the use of bycycle is a worthwhile step as it is beneficial for both folks and ambience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bicycle' or simply 'bicycles'?
Suggestion: a bicycle; bicycles
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
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Suggestion: the
...pared to cars. Adding to it, cycling is a best physical exercise and therefore pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08275862069 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82202143756 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2229786091 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177811010769 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566080468362 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511991446474 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106670553821 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203322011856 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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