Some companies have uniforms for their staff which much be worn at all times What are the advantages for a company having a uniform Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which much be worn at all times.
What are the advantages for a company having a uniform?
Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

Wearing uniforms in companies plays a vital role in a modern life. Many people believe that wearing uniforms can be beneficial. However, some individuals assume that wearing uniforms shouldn't be forced by companies . The present essay aims to discuss that the advantages of wearing uniforms outweighs its disadvantages.
It is generally agreed today that wearing uniforms can be very helpful to those people who care about their work. For one thing, wearing uniforms causes employees to focus on their works better than other employees without wearing uniforms. Therefore, companies can make profits and employees will earn more money than before. For instance, current data from well-known companies indicates that workers who wear uniform concrete on their works instead of showing off their clothes. As an illustration, employees without wearing uniforms spend lots of times on buying different clothes and be attractive among their colleagues in their workplace.
By contrast, there are several serious problems to wearing uniforms. In the first place, some companies tend to encourage their employees to wear dark clothes which has negative effects on their minds and feelings. In addition, it is an important point for quality of workers .An example may help clarify the point. One of popular sport companies in Germany forced their employees to wear black shirts and trousers after some years,the manager of company notice that most of employees suffer from depression and anxious and unfortunately they couldn't produce with high quality like before. In the second place, wearing some kind of tight uniforms make people not to work well physically. All in all ,uniforms can have bad impacts on employees in some ways.
By comparing and contrasting the positive and negative sides of wearing uniforms, I personally think that the upside of wearing uniforms is significantly more important than its downside. To support my position, I would like to offer two basic arguments. Firstly, Professor Smith the head of business department asserts that wearing uniforms is symbol of being unite and strong among employees in a company. In 1990,in Berlin, Adidas company could be successful to producing special uniforms with special logo and shared some pictures of employees with their eye catching uniforms which showed how much they are hardworking and team player. The latest figures released by the World Health Organization (W.H.O) reflect that about 78 percent of people who work in hospitals tend to wear uniform to seize up among people so that People can ask helps nurses and doctors easily and fast . In other words, wearing uniforms effects much more than we think it does.
To sum up,it can be stated that the light side of wearing clothes is better than it's dark side . However the question is that can wearing uniforms can improve the health and happiness of employees in general?only time will tell but in the meantime ,wearing uniforms continues to influence every aspect of every day lives.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in general, kind of, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2525.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 481.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24948024948 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58794085052 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525987525988 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3968638638 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.782608696 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9130434783 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5652173913 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288338676904 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100908575455 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630485889443 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183410630959 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544808829481 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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