In some contries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their levels of health and fitness are decresing. Do you agree or disagree?
While poverty and hunger is prominent issues of poor countries, then in others elsewhere in the world is obesity. Due to the modern world which make everything become more convenient, our lives has improved significantly in many ways and it included eating. But it is two side of a coin, it contribute a factor for overweight in
With the advent of fast food, people’s eating habit changed in easier and quicker but it have negative affected on our body. It can be denied that for many people who too busy to cook a meal, fast food is the best choice for them to save time then keep their working schedule. It gained popularity when people favour in spending time for some kind of food not time-consuming. Fast food ,<span style="font-size: 19.36px; line-height: 31.944px;">nevertheless</span> is the main reason lead to overweight. Because it contain more fat and provide excessive calories intake.
Another factor involves obesity is not only in their food but also in people’s lifestyle. Most of people lives spend on sitting in front of screen computer or TV. For example, when it come to reduce stress or relax people nowadays would prefer to suffering the internet than playing activities outdoor. Likewise, with the increasing sharply in car private, this is a clearly evident that people instead of cycling or walking they would take a drive. Lack in activities have led to accumulated fat in body lead to obesity.
Obesity is no longer is considered as a minor problem, it is considered as a epidemic. People should rise an alarm about their healthy, take diet and avoid indolence lifestyle by doing exercise everyday . Consider more carefully about what more important time or health. Its time for everyone treat their body more carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07534246575 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34619316557 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.257714711 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106590169179 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341141285193 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329250149139 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591757591162 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358196208293 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.