In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, obesity is one of the serious problems around the world. In some countries, the weight of individuals tends to go up while their health becomes decreases. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons and solutions for solving them
To begin with the first cause, nowadays people choose fast food for their breakfast or lunch even for their dinner because of the convenience. For example, citizens usually start their morning with a sandwich or hamburger and a cup of coffee and it saves many times for their preparations or traveling. However, they do not recognize that it contains a great number of calories and fats which damage their health day by day. So, people should cook and prepare their meals at home. Although it takes 1-2 hours per day, it can be alternative keys compare to using fast food. In addition, selecting organic and fresh food at the supermarket or store with the products labeled to show precise nutritional information is the essential choice for people who want to cook at home.
Regarding the second one, people are shrinking to do exercise or go for outside activities at the moment. Perhaps, their workload is too much to spend time on exercise or basically, they are too lazy to do it. To solve these problems, humans should consider doing exercise as a form of entertainment. Such as me, a student at the university, I usually go jogging or ride my bike for relaxing in the evening and it helps me to recover my energy for the next day. Moreover, people ought to make a schedule for controlling their time, spending more time doing exercise, gyms, or playing sports to improve their health and brain development
In conclusion, obesity and increasing weight are emergencies but they can easily to solve. I believe that in the future, citizens will realize and change their routines to have a healthy and beautiful bodies.
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- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them Give reasons for your answer and include any 84
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them Give reasons for your answer and include any 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e reasons and solutions for solving them To begin with the first cause, nowadays ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...the first cause, nowadays people choose fast food for their breakfast or lunch even ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83177570093 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61959132548 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4009714764 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212858609089 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712282681396 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428328479139 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126515253109 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436769671151 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.