Write about the following topic:
In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Obesity is now becoming more common among some countries and synonymous with that is the level of health and fitness is declining. In this essay I will clarify the causes and give some measures to resolve them.
First of all, the reason leads to the average weight of people is they do not have a balance diet. Eating too much in a meal is not only lead to be overweight but also get stomachache. Moreover, fat food and junk food are a noticeable main cause of this situation. For instance, almost people have a habit of eating candies or pizzas at snack, these products contain the big amount of sugar and calories. That the reason why we get fat in a short time. Therefore, in order to decrease the bad condition, we should eat small portion, cut out junk food and fat food. Trying to do these things I am sure that our health will becoming better.
The main second cause is the majority of people do not usually take exercises, especially the young. They often believe that they are youthful so their health is always kept steady. Furthermore, many people are so busy with their work and only want to stay in place as lying on the bed after finishing working. So that, to enhance this issue, people should do exercises moderately, spend at least 30 minutes everyday even during working time such as they can do some basic moves while having break time.
To conclusion, obesity is an important problem of people health and it results in shortening human lifespan. I totally agree that we can improve this one by having a balance diet and doing exercise more often.
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- Write about the following topic In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them Give reasons 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...e things I am sure that our health will becoming better. The main second cause is the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60854092527 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36148818245 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.40951295 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21893999634 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700320273033 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460924177409 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129968744686 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501723322713 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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