It has been generally observed that some people are facing problem of obesity, this leads to many diseases. The main reason behind this is unhealthy foods and fast food on which people are focusing more now a days. I am going to describe below this and how we can overcome from this problem.
To begin with, The main reason behind this problem is unhealthy foods which is manufactured by many unhealthy companies also now a days there is a trend of eating junk food like burger, pizza and pasta which is a more concern in the society. If we compared today's life with our history then we see old people are more healthier then the new generation. Because, they only eat home made food and also they more focused on the exercise.
Additionally, todays generation they do not prefer to walk, wherever they want to go they require any source to go to that place. Also people don't have time to do exercise because of their busy schedule and due to which they prefer to eat from outside to save there time.
In Conclusion, Government should banned all these companies who all are selling these kind of products also government should increased tax on these products, so that people think twice to eat it. People should tale out one hour from there routine life for exercise this is the only way they can make them fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
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Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6186440678 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28516756656 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580508474576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8978527136 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108267093895 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448152348525 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347178720471 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679011798987 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376828963305 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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