Nowadays, music is play important role in human being life. Because every human being life filled with tensions. In that situation people wants to relaxation to their mind. So in that movement to listen any type of music it gives relief to their minds. In that way music is need for every human being.
In the whole world there are many different types of music is there. In every country has own traditional music. It is more popular in own country. It is more important than the international music. Because in that music people heard own traditional lyrics and traditional words. Traditional music plays important role in the country. Because music will connect quickly in whole country therefore, every human being shouldn't forgot his own traditional music and his culture.
But, nowadays in some situations international music is dominating traditional and local music. Because present days traditional music is coming out and mix up with international music. So, people's are attractive and addicted to that music. Traditional music is fulley effected with international music. For example of this most famous western music like pop music. It is spread whole world. Most of the people in world listen this pop music and hooked to this music. They forgot their traditional music.
For example, in my country most of the people first to prefer to listening traditional music. Then after go for foreign music. In my view first I choose listening to our traditional music. Especially in that I like melodious music a lot. No one can beat this music because that is the power of melodious music. Most of the time I listen traditional music only. But in some cases I listen western music especially I listen lyrics. Because it helps to me to improve my English skills. Except in that case rest of the time I listen traditional music.
Conclusion is any one can listen any type music but do not forgot your traditional music. Because it is the mother of your country music. And western music also gives some benefits to improving English skills. But first prefer traditional and then after go for western music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lay important role in human being life. Because every human being life filled with tens...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... being. In the whole world there are many different types of music is there. In every count...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...many different types of music is there. In every country has own traditional music...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...le country therefore, every human being shouldnt forgot his own traditional music and hi...
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Message: Did you mean 'listen'?
Suggestion: listen
...y most of the people first to prefer to listening traditional music. Then after go for fo...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to listen'.
Suggestion: to listen
...oreign music. In my view first I choose listening to our traditional music. Especially in...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stern music especially I listen lyrics. Because it helps to me to improve my English sk...
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ten traditional music. Conclusion is any one can listen any type music but do not fo...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t do not forgot your traditional music. Because it is the mother of your country music....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in my view, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96629213483 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59075273762 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398876404494 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 16.0721442886 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.902614408 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.5757575758 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7878787879 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 3.4128256513 557% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533928445492 0.244688304435 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195394118835 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961047378134 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35382013278 0.151304729494 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940999485413 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.36 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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