I think borrowing money from a friend can be harm to any individual or it can not be. It depends on the situation which I am going to be describe below.
Yes, many times it happens when friend ask for money and we help him by giving money to him or her but him or her forget to return back that money which can spoil the relation between two of them. I will share one example with you, which is a part of my life. When I was studying in college that time I met with one guy who was I my class. After that we both become very good friend and we both shares a good bond with each other. Me and my friends both share each and everything with us. When ever we go out and we eat something or we purchase any product any one of us will pay the amount. But one day what happened, my friend ask me for money for his rent and said he will return to me after one month. I gave him the money because I trust him. But after one month he dint returned back money to me. Now two months passed away but after 2 month I called my friend and asked him to give my money back but he refused to return it, due to which we both spoil our relationship. After that we both have never talked to each other.
In another scenario if he had returned back the money to me after one month then I think we both were must be sharing a very good relationship.
There could be another scenario if I would have refused him to give money then I think we could have never share that relationship because that thing will always be in his mind that I have told him no to help him when he needs me.
So according to me we should help to our friends in matter of anything but in case of any money we should give him less money. So that he should not feel bad and in case if he don't refund it then we should also not feel bad for this.
Helping friends is a good thing. We Should help each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which I am going to be describe below. Yes, many times it happens when friend a...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
... to him or her but him or her forget to return back that money which can spoil the relation...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e with you, which is a part of my life. When I was studying in college that time I m...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'share'
Suggestion: share
...oth become very good friend and we both shares a good bond with each other. Me and my ...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...nd everything with us. When ever we go out and we eat something or we purchase any...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
... trust him. But after one month he dint returned back money to me. Now two months passed away...
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Line 3, column 844, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... Now two months passed away but after 2 month I called my friend and asked him to giv...
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Line 3, column 979, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o which we both spoil our relationship. After that we both have never talked to each ...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
... other. In another scenario if he had returned back the money to me after one month then I ...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: WERE_MD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where must'?
Suggestion: where must
...me after one month then I think we both were must be sharing a very good relationship. ...
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Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had refused'?
Suggestion: had refused
... There could be another scenario if I would have refused him to give money then I think we could...
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Line 6, column 199, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ays be in his mind that I have told him no to help him when he needs me. So acc...
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Line 8, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e should not feel bad and in case if he dont refund it then we should also not feel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 81.0 24.0651302605 337% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 3.94444444444 5.12529762239 77% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98204652832 2.80592935109 71% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420634920635 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8915828937 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4736842105 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68421052632 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129433116233 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525200539643 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703228031002 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774144644858 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686265153224 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.57 12.4159519038 45% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.87 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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