In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is true that, obesity or weight gain has been escalating and tumble the fitness and health status in some countries. However, in my opinion, the main factor of this phenomenon by the unhealthy life style and food adulteration. Though, the best way to tackle this crisis by the health education and fitness classes with enforcement of legislation over the market products and health education.
To begin with, excessive weight issue would be a detrimental effect on people and especially in younger generation by the fact of junk foods, and fast food supplements in daily basis. In brief, one of the main trend among people around the world would be the consumption of unhealthy food from streets, adulterated cuisines and so on. Which would lead to presumably kind of addiction, or somehow, low cost eatables, or just like fashions to consume. Moreover, industrialization makes people life become more stressful and inability to get time for exercise and personal fitness. For instance, survey report from UN, explains that, obesity and diabetes ratio predominant among people who worked in huge companies and IT workers.
Nevertheless, government should legislate laws and take rules and regulations for control the extra adulterate substances and make huge levy for such products. Owing to the fact that, people would mitigate the usage of such foods and which may lead to improve the health and reduce the consumption to some extent. Similarly, by the help of health department, government may organize health awareness programs and lecture classes for citizens from the schools. Make use of such project may enhance the health and inhibit the food relate diseases to the core. Furthermore, get ride of such issues by the construction of fitness centers in cities and employ good trainer to instruct needs seems to be lucrative effect as a whole. For example, famous IT company in Singapore, offer fitness classes for the employees in regular basis, which lead to significant reduction in obesity.
To conclude, having a sedentary life in modern world would be quite natural in some extent. Nevertheless, surging number of fatty people and poor health among citizen in certain countries would be the result of industrial fast going life. To solute such crisis by effective follow up measures of fittness centers and constitution for food and cuisine products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in brief, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21727748691 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76089164638 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557591623037 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1197822484 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.235294118 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.70588235294 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131694598849 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450555192436 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337580535494 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088616716012 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175265406949 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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