In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
Obesity has been a burning issue in many countries for quite a long time now. People are gaining weight and their level of health is decreasing. The main reasons behind this problem are technological advancement,lack of physical activities and unbalanced diet.
In the past people used to perform their works by themselves. There wasn’t any advanced technology as today to help them with their works. For example farmers are using modern methods of farming where they don’t have to be involved in that much physical labor as before. For very simple tasks people had to work a lot harder than today. Nowadays we can easily do our daily chores using modern tools. We have all the modern amenities to do whatever we have to do with a very little physical effort.
Advancement of transportation is another contributing factor for people to gain weight. Before those people used to walk to go somewhere nearby. Vehicles were rarely used. But now in some countries almost everyone has a car or some sort of automatic mean of transportation. There are public transportations like buses, trams, trains etc. These are preventing people even more from physical activities.
Nowadays unbalanced diet is a major problem. People don’t distinguish among foods that much. Moreover, processed foods are very harmful for human body, that lead to different types of diseases and of course obesity.
So to solve this problem awareness has to be raised among people about their overall health. People have to get involved at least in some sort of physical activity that will help them live a healthier life. Also, the government should take initiatives to aware people about the harms of processed food and unbalanced diet. But for any measure regarding this problem will only be successful if the people themselves are aware of their well being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, at least, for example, of course, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11551155116 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7411302311 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7934005869 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7727272727 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232902269766 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726734382323 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111527249792 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132071532585 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793773667376 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.