In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
One of the most controversial issues today is related to the relationship between children and parents. It is often advocated that the distinction is the age in the middle of relating parents and their offspring is generally greater than it was in the past in a certain country. I firmly believe that the pros outweigh the cons.
One point in favor of age between two distinct generations is that parents have time to prepare for parenting. First and foremost, it is noteworthy that they have time to substantial life experience accumulated. Moreover, parents tend to be more psychologically ready for raising their children. Furthermore, most parents always laying a solid foundation to guarantee quality as well as have a stable and rewarding income before having an infant. For instance, they get a job to earn money then they invest in different necessities such as a house, milk, clothes and a wide range of items for their offspring.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks to this situation when the distance between parents and children is greater than it was in the past. The cogent reason is that the different generations have an obstacle to in-depth mutual understanding. This is due to the fact that the wider generation gap associates with distinct hobbies, favorite topics and even life attitudes. Additionally, parents think from others’ angles as opposed to their children, giving rise to a lost parent and child bond. To illustrate, their offspring choose future careers but parents always tend to force their children to follow the career path they want.
All things considered, i once again reaffirm my position that pros outweigh cons cause merit has a wealth of tackle problems.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2023-09-07 | nguyen thanh sang | 11 | view |
2022-11-27 | Đặng Luân | 70 | view |
2022-11-23 | nguyen thanh sang | 11 | view |
2022-08-09 | idid382021 | 78 | view |
2022-08-08 | idid382021 | 78 | view |
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- the table compares the production of carbon dioxide in five countries in 2017 and 2018 67
- Some people say that protecting the environment is the government s responsibility Others believe that every individiual should be responsible for it Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009 the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period 100
- Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... merit has a wealth of tackle problems.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1103202847 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83845700794 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5947715902 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268087913161 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881656747649 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955370315799 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152430345274 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967996110613 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.