In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they had completed education and found job. Do the advantageous out weight the disadvantages?
In recent years, the number of grown people living with their moms and dads has increased despite their accomplished education as well as promising careers. Opinions are divided on whether this trend may lead to social advantages or disadvantages. This essay will argue whether the merits outweigh the demerits.
On the one hand, for a variety of reasons, such as parental dependance as well as the generation gap, living with parents after the legal age can bring negative influences. First and foremost, most people, before becoming an adult, have spent the majority of their time in the same house and have received care from their guardians. It is therefore logical that they keep depending on parental treatments, and refuse to go outside of their comfort zone. As a result, the consequences of that phenomenon will hinder the society’s development. Secondly, due to the gap among generations, arguments will often lead to despair rather than satisfaction. People from two distinguished times tend to have different viewpoints towards a problem, which may cause unwanted debates in a family.
On the other hand, there are many reasons, be it the increase price of accommodation and assistance from parents, to explain why a number of adults choose to live under the same roof as their parents. It cannot be denied that global development and inflation are making housing costs double, or even triple than how they used to be. In order to save money for other crucial purposes, they have a tendency to live with their parents in the same house, hence they can reduce the costs for accommodation. In addition, hardly can an adult do both of housework and working tasks simultaneously successfully, thus they find support from their parents. The support is not necessary financially, but also mentally. For instance, during Covid-19 lockdown, many people returned to live with their mothers and fathers as a mental support and the development for the family’s happiness.
In conclusion, it cannot be denied that living with parents can bring both benefits and drawbacks. Even though there are admittedly several drawbacks, I believe that the advantages of this growing development are more significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21288515406 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84645664572 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577030812325 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8640608392 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231654318768 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640403239061 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496811365614 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134882877759 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258370366308 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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