In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college , University or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
The culture of living with parents is still prevailing in some nations. There is no doubt that majority of adults live with their guardians after taking degrees from college and university or even after holding jobs. According to my perception the trend has both positive and negative impacts.
On the one hand, the trend of living with parents brings plenty of positive effects for adults. Firstly, if a person choose to live with parents then they can not only perform work but also assist parents in household chores. Moreover, instead of paying rent of apartments , people can save money for meeting overheads such as electricity bills, water bills and renovation expenses. However, living apart from parents Can cause harm to social bonding as people can not manage to interact regularly while they are working on other places. Therefore, by living with guardians adults can spend a lot of time with family after working hours. Secondly, family members support people whenever they have any problem because parents are more experienced so they help in sorting out problems. Finally, homesickness is another major hindership as while people live far from parents , they feel loneliness spending time with family members provide pleasure and relaxation to people.
On the other hand, along with positive effects ample of adverse impacts are also associated with this phenomenon. First of all, in today's stiff competition only those people can survive who are self - confident and independent but adults who live with parents even though they have hold jobs, may not take responsibility In effective way as they are rely on their parents and work according to their advice and directions. Besides this, deciding things by children themselves results in developing decision making skills, which makes them more responsible and careful. Additionally, keeping privacy is another stumbling block as parents interfere in every matter which may brings conflicts among family members and further cause another problems.
To conclude, although living with parents impacts children in a positive way yet I believe that it also leads some negative impacts which pose serous problems for children as they grow.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
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Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32664756447 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52008813377 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581661891117 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
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Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
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Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
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What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993928337734 0.084324248473 118% => OK
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Essay readability:
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flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
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gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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