In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?
It is true that there is a significant difference between the parental role of fathers and mothers. There are several reasons for this difference, and it will experience significant changes in the future.
The difference between the roles of fathers and mothers can be explained in several ways. The first reason lies in the conventional thinking of people. Although gender equality is widely accepted, many people in Asian countries still hold the belief that men are breadwinners and women are homemakers. In these countries, women still have fewer job opportunities and earn significantly less than their male fellows. As a result, they might have to sacrifice their career to take care of the family. Gender difference may be another reason. As men tend to be more strict and rational, they may teach their children to work hard and hold big ambitions. By contrast, women are soft, tender and get on well with others, so that children can learn to collaborate and develop social skills from them. Also, due to their characteristics, mothers often pay more attention to family and spend more time for children, while fathers often focus on making profits that support the family.
However, the current difference in parent roles of father mother will be lessened in the future. Firstly, the progress of equal rights has enabled women to take high positions in firms, so that they can earn more and become the breadwinners in their family. Meanwhile, as it is acceptable for men to leave their job to raise children, there will be more male homemakers in the future.
In conclusion, there are several factors that contribute to the difference in the roles of fathers and mothers, and this difference will be lessened in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03928571429 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73793969538 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503571428571 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5325203159 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196940195096 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848378596101 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105948969239 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153243611575 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390368786148 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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