In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who choose to educate their children at home instead of sending them to school.
It is argued that a number of parents opt for educating at home rather studying at schools. Although it has several benefits both children and parents, disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages.
Education is an essential part of children's life and it is not important where they teach either at home or schools. However, educating at home effectively whose parents can afford to hire a higher educated teacher. Undoubtedly it helps to improve children's skills which they teach individually rather than among a group of pupils. It is convenient for family who lives in distant with poor means of transportation. Moreover they prevent their children from car accidents. They more caring about their children staying at home. Having considered these benefits there are vital drawbacks as well.
Negative point is that children cannot explain their ideas among classmates. Furthermore this trend does not build up their tolerance and confidence as well. For example they can feel bored. If children take part in some kind of teamwork games their ability of being leadership makes them responsible for their attitude to study. If children can deal with everything appropriately with their schoolmates at school, they are more likely to keep good terms with their colleagues in the future workplace. A good relation with others is part of success.
To conclude, schools are more beneficial than home schooling. Traditional education provide a deal of life experience .
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- All parents want the best opportunities for their children There some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children s life 56
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- In some countries there has been an increase in the number of parents who choose to educate their children at home instead of sending them to school 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31759656652 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82925671327 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.799474999 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8823529412 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7058823529 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316167774817 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923032214278 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746890716796 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18256002283 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508859358792 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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