in some countries university student live away from home and in another cities while studying. do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of living in another city.
In this present era, all student want to study more. Many university students stay away from their family and hometown during the study. This essay will explain both aspects of this phenomena and also discussed which side is dominant the most. All the explanation are in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of drawbacks of living away from the home. First and foremost, if pupils went to other cities for learning, then they have to make food by themselves or buying from the outside, which is not good for their healths. Furthermore, living alone required multitasking skill, students have to do study and other housework, which consume the valuable time of students and they cannot focus accurately on the study. For example, 70% of students who stay in hostels were a low result, which was written in one survey of the times of India.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of benefits to living alone. Firstly, if pupils live in other cities, then they become more independent. they can make decisions by themselves, which is the main plus-point of them. secondly, those who live in hostels or PG, they have better multitasking skills, because they do more than one work at the same time. For instance, students do study as well as other work, which is related to living such as making food.
To conclude, although hostel life is beneficial, it has more disadvantages than advantages. students are suffering from health problems and less result because of living alone. In my words, the drawbacks outweigh the merits.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-03-14 | Kishanpatel | 65 | view |
| 2021-03-14 | Kishanpatel | 76 | view |
- some people think the main benefit of the international cooperation is in production of the environment while other thing that the main benefit is in the wall business please go to both of you and give your opinion 61
- Nowadays some country are spending a lot of money to make it easier to use bicycle why is this so Is it the best solution to transport problem 78
- Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- some people say that the best way to improve safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or riding motorbikes To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
- The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the University what extent do you agree or disagree 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...This essay will explain both aspects of this phenomena and also discussed which side...
^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccurately on the study. For example, 70% of students who stay in hostels were a l...
^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ies, then they become more independent. they can make decisions by themselves, which...
^^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
..., which is the main plus-point of them. secondly, those who live in hostels or PG, they ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Students
...has more disadvantages than advantages. students are suffering from health problems and ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9465648855 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53631626195 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0854068677 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229611174211 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773567818893 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606753177953 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135539389944 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308341305479 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.