some people believe that the government should spend more money to provide a faster public transport other thing that there are other in him priority for public transport such as cost an I am discuss both of you and give your opinion
In this present era, problems of public transport are increased daily. While few people think that the government should allocate more money to make public transport quick, others do not agree with this idea. They feel the environment and cost are more valuable rather than speed. This essay will explain both aspects and also gives my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons, which indicate speed is reasonable. First and foremost, people become more and more busy. They do not have much more time for travelling, therefore they believe to make transport service a little rapid. Moreover, fast public transport help to enhance the value of the country in front of the globe. For example, since Japan manufactured the fastest train in the world, that nation becomes more valuable. That was written by one survey of the University of London.
On the other hand, there are numbers of things, which say the cost of travelling and the safety of nature are important. Firstly, nowadays pollution is drastically increasing because of vehicles, therefore people think to make eco-friendly travelling system, which will not create pollution. Secondly, some poor people cannot afford tickets for bus and train, so it is better to reduce the price of tickets, and all citizens can reach their destination. For instance, the Indian railway has less tickets’ price, and all people are travelling very easily.
To conclude, although the speed of transportation is beneficial, the environment and the cost are more beneficial than speed. In my words, the authorities should spend money on public transport, which helps to save nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun tickets is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...n. For instance, the Indian railway has less tickets’ price, and all people are trav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22676579926 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62676695669 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7442146608 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316653582211 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909081173874 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694206129921 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188248327229 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071039344002 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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