In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city.
Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
You should write at least 250 words.
In several regions most undergraduates decide to live at home with their parents during their university period, whereas in other countries students tend to attend university with a long commuting distance. From my perspective, studying far from home, albeit somehow drawbacks, is associated with some more benefits.
Moving away from home for university curriculum can cause some unavoidable challenges for the students. Chiefs among these is how to allocate budget on their personal purpose appropriately, which can make students to think carefully before purchasing some products because their parents supply them an adequate amount of currency to utilize per month and it prevent them from the comfortable expense on distinctive things. If they desire to possess something that they are fond of, they must make a profound thought before paying money because it can cause the deficiency of cash on the last day of the month. Moreover, homesickness and loneliness are one of the factors that result in some drawbacks for undergraduates, which has a detrimental impact on mental health. This issue accounts for the decline in well-being and academic performance. Nevertheless, students will get used to their new life and they will overcome their initial fears of moving away from home.
In my opinion, moving to other regions to have a university education will bring numerous benefits for students. To begin with, it enables them to be more independent and self-reliant because they must engage in many different occupations to earn income to pay for their life instead of relying on their parents’ money, which may help them to be more successful in near future with the discipline and persistence. Apart from that, student will learn how to arrange their schedule reasonably, which will help them manage their life more efficiently without any troubles because they are mature to be aware of doing everything on their own in the absence of their parent assistance. Finally, living far from home can help students to be more punctual that is essential for either academic performance or promotion in work.
In conclusion, choosing another city to attend university may bring some unexpected experience and drawbacks for students. However, the positive far outweigh the negative with countless advantages which help to develop and enhance their life during university period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...elf-reliant because they must engage in many different occupations to earn income to pay for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34574468085 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82674108163 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1368012941 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360838493361 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128327514514 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102329685585 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254183071699 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112073812449 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.