In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.

Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

These days, it is becoming popular the teenager from several state prefer to get occupation or trip a year between graduated from secondary school and beginning college studies. In this essay completely agree that issue gives more advantage than disadvantage from some cases.

In the one hand, the benefit of the subject is to open-minded person. It is because youth who finished high school tend not to be able to make own decisions because of limited insight. This way, if they take a break to get out of habit then will find new knowledge not taught in school. In Japan, the teenager will go to other countries to find new thing such as learning language. As result is increasing the exchange student from Japan. It is important that do work or travel have influence and advantage.

Although, it matter also has disadvantage such as will impact bring down the motivation to studies at university. It is because when someone has a lot of friends or is comfortable with new activity it liable to change goal. For example, student who take part in internship think they are able to work professionally without having to continue seat of learning. Which is result the aim planned are in line. There is not to doubt that give adverse effects.

In conclude, however the issuescan certain negatives impact like decrease the spirit to continue learning, it has on extremely positive vibes on young people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun state seems to be countable; consider using: 'several states'.
Suggestion: several states
...t is becoming popular the teenager from several state prefer to get occupation or trip a year...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd new thing such as learning language. As result is increasing the exchange stude...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'matters'?
Suggestion: matters
...nfluence and advantage. Although, it matter also has disadvantage such as will impa...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ut having to continue seat of learning. Which is result the aim planned are in line. ...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. In conclude, however the issuescan certain negatives impact like decrease t...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, then, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8870292887 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6327336016 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.677169873 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178484634071 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044331947166 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450902600496 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864596911512 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311965871197 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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