In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.
Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decided to do this.
Nowadays, teenagers in several countries are encouraged to work or travel for a year between completing high school and higher education. This trend comprise of positive and negative effects. In this essay, I am be quite to prepare the merits rather than demerits for students who decide on this.
The students was choosing to work or travel for several time, because it would give more useful experiences for their future life. They might get more informations by some people on many situations and conditions, sometimes it was made them to be mature. For example, young people who has working experiences in company for a year, it gave them a large of lesson, they had got figure out any kind of subjects at work. As a result, they has some references to consider chooses their major for next education. There is no doubt for make a decision when that is a choice from their perspective.
However, there is disadvantage for people who who do not have enough support to guide them for continue their education. It could make the student not excited to go university education. Based on research, most of company employ a large employees who had low education, which is for specifically high school degree. While, they are was skilled and had good performance, but they are do not has career progression. There are consequences for each other decisions.
Overall, its some evidences as reference for making a decision before starting to college education. There are a large of advantages, but it also has some disadvantages in any conditions. Young people should be aware and consider the benefit and weakness be wisely before taking a decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...school and higher education. This trend comprise of positive and negative effects. In this ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...d negative effects. In this essay, I am be quite to prepare the merits rather than...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
... who decide on this. The students was choosing to work or travel for several ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...ents was choosing to work or travel for several time, because it would give more useful expe...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... of subjects at work. As a result, they has some references to consider chooses the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: who
...wever, there is disadvantage for people who who do not have enough support to guide the...
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Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'employee'?
Suggestion: employee
...esearch, most of company employ a large employees who had low education, which is for spe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...lly high school degree. While, they are was skilled and had good performance, but t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... and had good performance, but they are do not has career progression. There are c...
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Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...d good performance, but they are do not has career progression. There are consequen...
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Line 13, column 10, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...or each other decisions. Overall, its some evidences as reference for making ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, kind of, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963898917 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77540562027 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1594072181 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402683534227 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118506363909 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768748756405 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235747741941 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386639269124 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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