In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this
Many adolescents tend to work for a year before studying university. There have some pros and cons to that issue. On the one hand, there are several reasons why working in a new place is beneficial for young people. Firstly, they learn many practical skills to improve their soft skills and academic skills. Not only that, but they also learn a new language and speak fluently with foreign peers. Moreover, they have many foreign friends and exchange cultural information to know more together and help together in difficult situations. Secondly, they can explore new historical sites in the country where they’re working. On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages of working abroad that people should consider carefully. To make it clear, typically, they have to be independent when they leave home, leave the hand of their parents, instead of it, they have to make a budget for themselves through paying for living expenses during staying in a homestay. Not only that, but they also don’t get used to acclimatizing to a new life, and the cultures at the beginning of working in a new country, they may be sensitive with many new people and severe work environment. In addition, unless they study hard in high school, it’s hard for them to learn academic knowledge and work in harsh conditions meanwhile they haven’t finished studying in high school yet, before studying university, most youths haven’t had experiences yet so that working abroad makes them confused and it’s difficult for them to choose a wise way between working early and continue studying university. In conclusion, working overseas could bring some benefits. However, its drawbacks shouldn’t be overlooked, so that before working in a new country, you should consider carefully among two choices such as working in a new place or starting studying university. In my opinion, studying at university is the best choice for people who want to improve their soft skills and increase their experiences academic knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many adolescents tend to work for a year...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69110789372 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.8052694225 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238918616098 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814157238646 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657066314586 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238918616098 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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