It is true that the youngsters in some parts of the world are not happy as we thought despite all the material possessions that they have. There are some reasons for this, but steps can be taken to tackle the problem.
In my opinion, two main factors are blame for people’s unhappiness nowadays. Firstly, people are now living fully so they don’t feel happier than in the past when they are in poverty. For example, how did you feel when you got the first wage in your company? That truly is the memorable happy milestone in young people’s lives. Secondly, young ones find it difficult to find out any other meanings of life after becoming successful. In addition to the wealth, health and expectancy which they try to achieve, making someone happy is also a way of making oneself happier.
The state of being less happy in youth can certainly be improved. I believe that the change should start with jumping out the comfort zone to embark on a new challenge. A tricky situation lets them consistently try hard, and at any time young people reap the rewards, they always feel enjoyable. Also, the next generation should care more about their family members at least and do charity for helping more and more unlucky ones. This is the attitude that I believe young people should foster to live meaningfully.
In conclusion, young people will continue to feel less happy despite the fact that they gain wealth, health and expectancy unless they change their mindset about happiness.
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- Some people believe that children should do organised activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to do what they want to do in their free time Which viewpoint do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to s 61
- In some countries young people have become richer healthier and live longer but they are less happy What are the causes What can be done to address this situation 84
- Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82421875 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4093140749 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0885010568 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268939779315 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913947433147 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643974804035 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161868774486 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217707416819 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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