In some country young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Many people hold the belief that young individuals should take a break before pursuing higher education at university. Doing this can have both positive and negative effects.
There are several benefits that can be reaped from having a break from studying after graduating from high school. Indeed, by entering the workforce, youngsters can expose themselves to the working environment and thus gain valuable hands-on experience. The merit of this is that they are able to put their academic study into perspective when they take university courses later. By way of illustration, students majoring in business administration can better imagine how accounting theories and standards are applied in proper context if they have previous experience in reading financial statements and handling transactions as a cashier. Another advantage to be taken into account is that by spending time visiting different places during their gap year, high school students can broaden their horizons and therefore have better personal resources to draw on, which is a very important factor regarding coping with the challenges of university life.
On the other hand, this trend can do serious harm to young adults as they may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to re-adapt to the academic environment. In fact, it is often said that taking a year out before starting a degree course allows a young person to take part in dissolute activities. These activities may take a heavy toll on the student’s performance by undermining their physical and mental health. Moreover, such activities could be a waste of time. As a result, students may fall behind with their study and therefore fail to meet requirements for university, hence dropping out of college. For instance, many Vietnamese students result in failing the university entrance exam as they are unable to utilize this time to do a thorough preparation.
In conclusion, while taking a gap year before college can be beneficial, it also has several drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87937655194 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4471826615 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157283869694 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508633766551 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375069078941 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895210071576 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427375600036 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.