When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold the belief that the purpose of the buildings are the most essential factors, while their exterior designs are of lower priority. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this view for several reasons.
The first argument given to support my opinion is that it is important to take the use of buildings into account. If a building does not properly function according to plan, it will lead to not solely a waste of construction costs and materials but also enormous amounts of land being misused. This contributes to accommodation issues, particularly in metropolises. By way of illustration, in Ho Chi Minh City, there are skyscrapers that cost tremendous amount of money for construction but are of little use which aggravating the problems of housing shortage.
Another rationale behind my belief is the fact that it is equally essential to take the exterior architecture of a building into consideration. Such a magnificent covering on the outside of a building can bring about many commercial values as it draws the customer’s attention. To specify, a person who gets a positive first impression with the exterior is more likely to enter the building to ask for services. Take Vincom Plaza as an example, it attracts massive influx of Vietnamese consumers every year and generates an enormous source of income for the investors thanks to its attractive outer appearance.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with the view that the functions of buildings are the most significant factors rather than the outer designs. This stems from the fact that these two factors bring equally considerable advantages and therefore play equally crucial roles when it comes to building construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23550724638 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05577871481 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.589992226 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182550579742 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606037252505 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573504732156 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107730113262 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05072139861 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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