Children are main factor of success in each nation and growing of them different from each other. In some cultures, they try to free their kids and give them enough opportunity to explore and next one told them try hard to find and achieve best gape in future. In following essay work to describe hard working of children and show advantage and disadvantage of this.
Hard working is one of good habit which every one should try to access, because make our life be self-reliant and we endure our issue instead of another, but some thing lost here, which is that, what's value of inject this behavior in our children. This is clear that our kids is our wealth and individuals try to keep them and be keen every time.
Repeating try hard else you wouldn't be success in life my be has vise verse effect. For example some children have sensitive fell which me be destroy when they couldn't gain any positive point in time. In most time, they annoy their self and after while lose self confidence and consequently wouldn't find suitable place in society.
I believe, hard working should be mix with our personality and each one must make their self to adopt with hard working. You should try hard and make enough effort as when can't receive prospective harvest don't annoy their self. Even tough, there is some people which use this item as punishment object to polite, impolite kids.
All in all, hard working is one of the best attribute in our personality which try to learn from children, but we should keep a balance between our nature and outside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63272727273 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26418467255 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.572656436 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271421052861 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101408212236 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647094639899 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153964642093 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875918676106 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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