Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At the present, music is one of the quintessential parts of some people's lives, and some researchers consider that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. However, I completely disagree with this notion, and express my opinion in the following paragraphs with smooth examples, before a reasoned conclusion.
On the one side, it is indisputable that some individuals are fond of playing the piano, guitar, violin, or other such kinds of instruments. Mainly because music performs a significant role in some peoples' lifespan. If someone has this kind of God-given talent, as well as curiosity, he/she may become a singer or compositor in the bright future. For instance, Mozart, Beethoven was one of the most familiar compositors all over the world, and their sonatas, music, operas became extremely popular among the residents who interested in this sphere. Therefore, if children interested in playing musical instruments, parents and teachers should support them by assisting financially or practically.
On the other side, not all the inhabitants are a fan of playing musical devices. That is because, some children like reading books, learning computer programs, or constructing modern buildings. For example, it is irrefutable that every person has distinctive perspectives, outlooks, and experiences. According to this reason, nobody can modify a person's interest. Playing musical tools may sometimes assist in order to be far from stresses or work-related issues. Nevertheless, nobody has to learn how to play these kinds of devices.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are various residents in the globe, and they should occupy with their favorite exercises. As a result of this trend, these activities affect their health positively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...sic performs a significant role in some peoples lifespan. If someone has this kind of G...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...or practically. On the other side, not all of the inhabitants are a fan of playing musica...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01139926278 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0299887584 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247712545556 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748836293045 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960576494818 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146638985193 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104138861673 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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