Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, economic growth is vital in any country. Some people believe that any increase in wealth of a rich country cannot satisfy its people while others counter it. In my perspective, I mostly agree with the idea that extra adds in economic cannot please its inhabitants.
First of all, it is true that economic growth will financially benefit the citizens. However, being more wealthy does not mean people would be happier. The more they gain, the more expensive the goods are. Some people may be richer than the people in developing countries but they still are poor in a country that has a sky-high cost of living. Besides, some people use the extra money they gained to spend on gambling or risky business. Eventually, some of them become richer, others may lose the invested money, which makes them not satisfied at all.
In addition to pleasing its citizens, some countries shift their main priority from economic development to social well-being or social welfare to be able to create a happy country. For instance, many North European citizens are happy because the government offers these people the best social welfare and education in the world. Besides, the economic gap between the people with high social status and normal people is small so that they are more balanced in social position. Everyone is treated equally as others, the richer receive the same treat as the less wealthy ones.
For all the aforementioned reasons, a developed country does not have to focus much on the nation’s economic development. They would rather focus on social well-being to make their citizens the happiest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...in social position. Everyone is treated equally as others, the richer receive the same tre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05904059041 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50754230527 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2244876595 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238288051336 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079305822003 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719560468988 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154504973447 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900702085971 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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