Some feel that it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern busy times, people are extremely occupied with their day to day activities that they are least bothered about future planning, as it was in earlier days. Some people believe that investing too much time and energy on organizing the future can only end up in elevated stress levels, as the future is totally unpredictable, but others advocate that a proper outlining of future goals is indispensable to channelizing accurate balance between current and future prospects. Although creating a future outline is a very tedious and time-consuming process because of unprecedented future times but still, beforehand planning can help to design a systematic path for a smooth flow from present to future goals. I am at discord with the given statement and think that for a shining and successful future a timely plan is the need of the hour.
In the 21st century, the young generation is indulged more in a relaxed and stressfree environment. They believe in spending their savings to enjoy and explore the present world. They do not want to pressurize their mind and health with future worries, which are not in their control. For instance, Earlier parents were securing kid's futures by investing a good proportion of their savings on children's studies and property, but today's generation believes more in self-independence. Hence, due to a huge generation gap, a lot of new modern living philosophies have engulfed society.
On the other hand, a small sector of society strongly believes in securing the future through accurate planning. As a proper decided future goal helps in deciding a systematic path to be taken at the current situation. Moreover, it helps in reducing mental stress due to a clear vision of future activities. For example, with a clear future goal, parents can save enough budget for higher education and secure the career of their children along with managing old age comfort. So, it is always a wise step to think in the context of the future to enjoy a successful present time.
To conclude, giving more value to future goals over the present life scenario is a debatable topic among many masses. In my opinion, being clear about future prospects can gobble up many present insecurities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0597826087 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80131281673 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557065217391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0109617326 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227974733255 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765345899349 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507686908603 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139272631821 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449314710812 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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